Shuusui the dark sword

Name:Shuusui

Appearance:

Rank: A rank

Special Abilities:
Getsuga Tenshō :Every time the sword is swong it creats a wave of dark energy that looks like black cresent moon is use up the user chakra to use Asher can only swing his sword 20 time before He become tired from chakra drain Getsugha and easly be dodge but only if the user can move as fast as the Getsuga to get out of its way. the getsuga take up 25% of the user Chakra base on the size of the attack there are 3 size there small that take up 25% of the user chakra there medium that take 50% and there larg that takes 75% of the user chakra.

kuro juujika: this skill lets Asher create a giant cross made of darkness that incress the power of Getsuga Tenshō but the dark cross can easly be taken down by a A rank attack the giant cross is at least as larg as a the 9 tailed beast the cross give Shuusui dark chakra to incress the Getsuga Tenshō. Kuro Juujika take 5 % of the user Chakra to use

baizou sumiyaka: a skill that lets double the user swinging speed and lets him slash faster and stronger but it remove the use of Getsuga Tenshō and kuro juujika. this skill only last for a short time before it ends baikou Sumiyaka take 10% of the user chakra and last for only 10 minutes

Element(If Any):Meiton yes its a real element

Origin:
the sword had been work on over three years Asher keep on brining in the best matiria for the sword such as steel and iron and a meteor that fell to the ground asher keep on bringing Ogimashu these matiria for his sword the. sword was then heated over 1000 time with in the three years and re-sharpen over and over the blade was then Forge with the fang of a snake summon and the horn of a rino and the scale of a snake and a fang of a kamodo dragon.

the sword was strong to be held in lava for 5 minutes before it started to melt it was then taken out and re sharpen and was place back in to the lava once more but this time it lasted 10 minutes.

Asher aslways showed up to giving it new matiria but left after words the sword was then giving a seal in with it give its dark element do it after the seal on place on it Ogimashu was hearing the sword talk to him the sword keep on saying Kill kill kill.

as long as ogimashu stayed around the sword the more it was taking oe Ogimashu mind.

after he saw the power of the Shuusui the dark power of the sword he when insane with power and started to kill people in his own village the other villagers try to kill him but the power of the sword would not let him die that easy after three days of killing asher showed up to collect his sword Ogimashu try to kill Asher Ogimashu keep on swinging his sword at Asher but asher stop his with a easy kick and sent his flying in to a house Asher then use his wood release and wrap the guy up in wood and took the sword and killed Ogimashu by slashing his neck.

Blood squirted out as Ogimashu fell to the ground blood pored out from the person Asher when over to the house and grab the sword case and place the sword back in to it Asher then blase his hand on the sword and swong it as a black cresent moon came out and cut down houses. Asher look at the black blade and smiled as he walk out of the village and kids hidding Asher just look at them and walk away not caring for them at all.

the sword saw how strong asher was the sword try to take over Asher mind but had no luck so the sword gave in to Asher and let him use his power of darkness asher came up with three skills such as Getsuga Tenshō, kuro juujika and baizou sumiyakato help him kill more people.
The power of the sword did not effect asher at all Asher was not scared or sad at all the sword was evil it would have taken over any other person mind with out trying the sword did try to take over Asher mind but it failed every time.

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Add more to origin and describe the Special Abilities more.

better

Approved, I guess.

No it isn't

Origin must be at least 500 words long for A-Rank weapon.

Also I want to see more description to your skills + add how much chakra does each skill takes not only Getsuga.

done i change the sword to B rank

Change the sword back to A-Rank. You shouldn't change it to lower rank just because you are lil lazy. As an Akatsuki you should easily be able to write about 500 words.
Also giving chakra use with % isn't very good but if want you that way then I am okay with it.

fine i will think of more stuff then

ok done

Approved unless said otherwise.